Godzenie

12 more hours of revisions of first and last sections of Godzenie.

Getting really close now . . .

getting close to happy with this manuscript that has picked up bits and bobs from manuscripts in North Carolina.

Think this is my first mature manuscript.

Wonderland needed some rethinking but the last section written last Christmas in Poland REALLY needed work on rhythm and pacing.

A bit more tinkering, but not much.